mid-May to the 50-page sample text to be ready, I have promised, and how it looks, I think, set the deadline.
like Why is it so much print, the text the first time? Probably because he is suddenly real and I can see the thickness of the paper, what I did.
Now I am here to transfer to the corrections into the computer (people who buy Scrivener, the money's worth). I am uncertain whether the Anfage not too fast, but I immediately wanted to go in the middle in the world and time of J.
happened the first 20 pages much the same time, the person introduced. I do not know if I need something equalize so that collapse is not too much information at once to the reader. But actually the pacing is right for my main character J.
But can the second chapter, written from the perspective of the second main character, leisurely. Fits, because R is more passive than J. In fact, I like the different narrative speeds well and I use them will continue. Only I have to make sure that this will not schematically, otherwise it quickly becomes boring.
My biggest problem with the beginning is that I have so much information must be accommodated, but I do not want to bother with long explanations. The historical background, I must at least scribe because of the action directly affected. And then there are the mythical creatures, magic and special way to work. But J is it just surprised as the reader, so it may fit quite well.
It's great that I now know exactly how it goes. Until yesterday I had a gap between the beginning and the second part. Now I'm looking forward to Chapter 4
Yesterday I am also terribly annoyed: I had a fantastic title, but had Are finding that there is already a fantasy novel with that title. Although out of print, but there is probably nothing to be done.
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